Don’t Pamper Your Heroes

Is Hercules your hero?

Give your hero or heroine huge and even insurmountable problems and then give them more. Make their journey harder and harder.

Where else in life are we given these instructions? Most of us want to help, as we have been taught. We want to make others’ lives better, especially for those we love or respect. 

This attitude translates into our first fiction forays where we paint perfect people eminently qualified to be heroes or heroines in our books. The trouble is, perfection is annoying if not downright boring.

We are not perfect and we  actually identify more readily with people who, like us, have flaws along with their good characteristics. And this drawing of imperfect heroes helps us believe we could be the heroic person at the center of a novel.

Want to interest the reader? Take a character the reader relates to and put that character in jeopardy. Heck, put them in double jeopardy. If the stakes are high and escalate, the reader will be bleary-eyed from lack of sleep, ensuring that they’ll tell others about your book. Donald Maass talks about the breakout premise, something which sets your storyline apart from the masses and makes it break out. Creating high stakes over and over will add so much to your novel, as to work hand in hand with the breakout premise.  

So pamper yourself. Go have a spa day, buy yourself those amazing shoes or that expensive book, but don’t, I repeat, don’t pamper your heroes!

What hero do you remember whom you absolutely loved so much that you couldn’t get on with life for the need to read about her? Consider leaving a comment with your own formula for creating memorable heroes. 

 

Plot Lines in a Writer’s Life

Do you see your writing journey as concrete as the output of this plotter? Or is the ink all smudged with erasures and restarts?

I’ve met a lot of writers, some early on in my life and many more in the last five years since I really got serious. And  I often wonder if they have all gone through the journey that I have or was it just, write the manuscript, edit, and publish?

What I do know is that there are plot lines in a writer’s life, elements of similarity which we all experience, and they resemble a plot diagram with publication the final climax. Continue reading

Lush Vineyards and the CIA in the Napa Valley

Note to Writers:  We are holidaying in California so I am taking a break from my traditional writing topics to celebrate our destinations.  Regular topics will resume this Friday.  Enjoy!

Friday was a day to tour some of the delights of the famed Napa Valley. We knew about the vineyards but a surprise awaited us. Every vineyard has its own claim to fame aside from its wine.  The one below had this lovely pool and gardens and their wines were tasty.  Of course, we’re not connoisseurs but that didn’t matter and we bought out first bottle here.


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